Narrative Peer Edit

Author’s name____________________________________

Editor’s name_____________________________________

1. What is the author’s purpose? How can you tell?  Is it insightful?
   
   
2. Briefly summarize the specific story or experience shared in the paper.
   
   
3. What is the overall impression of the setting or a primary character?  List three details that the author included to “SHOW, not tell” that impression.
   
   
4. On the author’s paper, squiggly underline any points that don’t add to or support this focus.
5. What is one thing this paper did very well?
   
   
6. What is one thing the author may need to revise before turning this in?
   
   
7. What is one question you still have after reading this piece?